Once again, except better...
Hello,
The story is more fleshed out and easier to understand.
You're actually delivery of the script is very professional, you don't ever fall into
what I call the horrible "blank", that is when you say lines flawlessly then suddenly forget a word or stutter... Being that I've done some voice acting myself, I KNOW how hard this is to pull off.
The voices suit the story well, and as I mentioned in the last review the "dynamic"
sounds were quite well done...
In conclusion, you're piece was well executed, funny, and clear.
Well done sir!
Thanks,
- Celx